Week5/Presentation Feedback - Planning

/Aerial Ropeway in a World Heritage Environment

Bethany Louise, Maria, Daisy, Iqra, Yen, Matthew.

/The Bus Stop of the Future
Jason, George, Violet, Michael, Tonny.

Critics:

1 Keep reading the notes or screen, have no eye contact or body language to communicate with audience;

2 Voice not loud enough to get everyone's attention through all presentation;

Good things learned:

1 Clear layout of powerpoint slides to show the keypoint, well thought of hierarchic with the slides format;

2 Interesting ideas of video editing such as appropriate background music of the video, jump out of subtitle;

3 Detailed analysis of a variety of situations and the importance of each part during the whole project;

After the presentations, I have learned that Planning is every important for a group project. To analyze the expected and unexpected situations of the project, we could have a well control of everything during the process.

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Our group will be present next Wednesday, and we have already done some research and built up several ideas about the interface of project, the use of database. What we need to focus for now are:

1 Powerpoint slides for the presentation;

2 Video making about the project processes;

Also we are informed by tutor Stephen:

1 have to considering about Aesthetics of our own project style;

2 our client John James wants everything simple and cartoonish;

We will have a group meeting on Friday to get further work out.